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They found her, the porcelain doll.
Hidden in her secret corner,
they took her, stole her
Innocence

They changed her, the porcelain doll.
Undressed her, removed the rags
that once were, but will never be
Safety

They broke her, the porcelain doll.
Throwing her on the ground,
smashing to pieces all that she had
Reality

They hid her, the porcelain doll.
Ashamed of what they did, they realised
the doll was no doll, she was only in disguise
Little sister
©2005-2009 ~Empty-Paper
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I had no idea in what section it belonged, so I put it in General Poetry.
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I like the sudden ending, it leaves you hanging and wondering for more :)
Oooh i like this! The breaking of a porcelain doll is a brilliant image :clap:
wow... powerful! another :+fav:

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Thank you so much for your nice comments!

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I really like this. It tells a story in very few words. Like Japheree said, the breaking of the doll is a powerful image. And I love the ending; it makes a lot of sense.
This is brilliant, I especially love the layout..

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Aww, thanks! :hug: And thanks for the fave too!

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i love the imagery of this and the way you ended the poem... has a nice twist...

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in the midst of a thousand drops of red, a howl was heard from his beaten wrists...

insanity has set in...

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